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【摘要】目的 了解2008年我院药品不良反应（ADR）的发生情况及ADR发生的一般规律。
[ABSTRACT]OBJECTIVE：To find out the occurrence of adverse drug reaction(ADR) in our hospital and its general rules。
方法 对我院2008年全年中收集并上报的104例ADR报告进行统计、分类并分析。
METHODS：collected throughout the year in 2008 and reported 104 cases of ADR reports to statistics, classification and analysis。
结果 104例ADR中，皮肤及附件器官损伤居多，其次是消化系统的ADR，一方面为不合理用药或用药不当所造成；另一方面则因医药学研究技术和人们认识水平的限制而导致的必然现象。其中抗菌药物引起的ADR居多，其次为中药制剂。
RESULTS：in 104 cases of ADR, the most allergic reactions, followed by the digestive system of ADR, On the one hand, unreasonable use or caused by inappropriate medication; on the other hand, due to medical research techniques and the level of awareness of the restrictions which led to an inevitable phenomenon. Antimicrobial agents which cause the majority of ADR, followed by traditional Chinese medicine preparations。
结论 应加强ADR监测报告以及建立ADR反馈机制，进一步提高ADR病例报告的质量，从而促进合理用药，避免ADR重复发生。
CONCLUSION: ADR monitoring report should be strengthened and the establishment of ADR feedback mechanism to further improve the quality of the report ADR cases, so as to promote rational drug use, to avoid recurring ADR。
【关键词】药品不良反应；用药监测；安全有效；合理用药；
[KEY WORDS]Adverse drug reaction;monitor drug use;security and effective;Rational drug use；

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To get an understanding of the adverse drug reaction(ADR) incidences in our hospital
and how they've occured.

Count, classify and analyze the 104 cases of ADR collected and reported
in our hospital throughout the year 2008.

Of all the 104 ADR incidences, most leave their damages on the skin and its accessories, followed by the incidences ocurred in the digestive system. The
causes of these ADR incidences are, on the one hand, irrational or inappropriate
uses of drugs; on the other hand, limited research techniques and limited knowlege and understanding of people(the latter is seen as inevitable). The majority of the incidences are caused by antibiotics, followed by Traditional Chinese Medincine preparations.

the monitoring and reporting of ADR incidences should be improved and corresponding feedback system be established so that the quality the reports of ADR incidences can be further improved, rational uses of drugs prompted and the reccurence of these incidences avoided.   


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